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Question: many pairs in Hong Kong are sending their children to other countries to complete their schooling . White an article for your school magazine examining two reasons for this phenomenon . You should also discuss the impact of this on local schools and on children who leave to study overseas




Sending children to study oversea

One of oddest phenomenon of parents in Hong Kong, they are sending their children to other countries,to complete their schooling. In theory ,the parents in Hong Kong should let their children study in local. Nevertheless, they are not . Why parents prefer study abroad more than study in local?
What parents think is the schools in other country are better than local school . They hold the belief that the quality of educational system in other is better like teacher and facility , but also the circumstance is of utmost importance . In Hong Kong ,students are very busy and dipping in spoon-feeding education . Students who study in Hong Kong ,they have much thing pressure on study . They have many thing they must do such as first exam , last exam ,HKDSE and HKTSA . It's make children tensional ! Oppositely,the school which is in oversea is more relaxing than local . We can see local school isn't as relaxing as abroad . That's why parents prefer sending their children other countries.
Moreover, parents who send their children's to other countries in pursuit of their children to be independence . Doing the cooking,solving the conflicts that they may have and going to clinics when there are in illness are illustration of make children to be independence . The parents,not hoping their children depend on them too much,send their children to other countries .
On this phenomenon,someone are impacted by this phenomenon . For example, local schools is among in these . The badly effect ,when a children who is well in study . This children will study in local school continue in theory ,but his parents send him to oversea . Too more high quality students have gone out ,the ranking of local school will be lag behind in term.
For children who are study abroad, they missed their parents and friends in Hong Kong so much . They lack of care from family when they are facing with a hard problem, Real men children have depression easily . In positive viewpoint , do you abroad can make more friends who come from different countries and know their culture . Make children knowing how to Earth rotates .
More parents want their children to be independence and study in the high quality school, but they ignore about the feel of children . I hope one thing are parents should do that before in sending their children to oversea, ask children,'Would you like to study abroad?'.



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2015/10/23, 12:48:34 凌晨
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